The Doctor Gets a Visitor II
by: E Walk

(Copyright 2007 by the Author)
 

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Chapter 14
 Reinforcements Arrive

I was just finishing the bar set up when Drew and Kenny came in and Drew said, “Hi White Boy, we dun come He oh da help yuh.”
 
Jeff laughed, “Well, Black Punk, that is down right neighborly of you considerin” that y'all thinks you’re too good to eat with us.” Jeff turned to them and said, “Guys, thanks for coming.” And he gave them jobs.
 
The three of them were working and talking Tyler and Kevin came and asked, “What can we do?”
 
Jeff put them to work.
 
Everyone was working when Beau, Mickey and Chris came in laughing. Beau was carrying most of the cleaning supplies, Chris had the vacuum and the rest of the cleaning supplies and Mickey had a big basket of towels and dirty clothes.
 
Jeff looked at them and said, “I have some questions. First, why is your hair all wet?”
 
Beau answered, “We were cleaning the showers and you can’t do a good job if you don’t get wet.”
 
Matt, who had come in with Mark, Ben and Josh asked, “So, all three of you were in the showers at the same time. Are the showers that large?”
 
“No, but it was more fun.” answered Chris.
 
Mickey came in and Jeff asked, “Why were there so many towels?”
 
“When you do three showers and there are three of you, it takes a lot of towels to get dry, and then we gathered all the soiled towels so we could do them at the same time.” Mickey answered.
 
Sammy came storming in and said, “I need to do some laundry. I don’t have any clean underwear for tonight.”

“Too bad, the wash machine is busy, and will be for some time. You always wait until the last minute. Use your head and plan better.” Mickey challenged.
 
“Mickey is absolutely correct in what he said.” Jeff added. “I’ll loan you a pair of briefs. I’ll get them for you shortly.”
 
Mark looked at Chris and asked, “Are those your dirty underpants in your back pocket?”
 
“Yes, and before you ask, we cleaned the shower nude and no we are not free balling. Mickey loaned Beau and me a clean pair of his briefs.” Chris answered.

Beau said, “They are so cool as he dropped his jeans. Doctor Dad can I take some of the money Jeff paid me and buy some?”
 
“They sure are skimpy.” Kenny laughed.
 
Jeff said, “We’ll discuss that later. Where are the other five guys?”
 
“They’re asleep on Doctor Dad’s bed.” Beau answered. “Someone should take a picture. They’ll never believe it ever happened.”
 
Josh handed the camera to Jeff and said, “Here’s your camera. Mother has already put a new card in it. It’s ready to go, and here is a copy of the other photos you wanted.”
 
Jeff and Beau went upstairs and opened the door. Beau went over to Teddy and pointed out that Toby had his hand on Teddy’s genital area. Jeff took one shot and then took another. On the second flash Spencer bolted up. “Oh no, not lightening please.” He was shaking.
 
Jeff pulled Spencer to him tight, and said, “Its okay, Tiger. I was just taking a picture of you five sleeping beauties.”
 
Chip grabbed Spencer’s face and said, “Tiger, please stop shaking. You’re scaring me.”
 
Beau pulled Spencer off of the bed and said, “Lieutenant Knight, stand tall, tuck in that gut and smile. Let the enemy see your beautiful smile. Stop upsetting my Commander, Chip. Now Chip, stand up and show these Lieutenants how strong you are. Beau showed him what to do and Chip complied.
 
Jeff interrupted and said, “Lieutenants Lincoln and Thompson, you need to get ready to go home, but first I need to talk to Lieutenants Thompson and Smith in the study.”
 
The three of them went into the study and Jeff showed them the pictures he had taken and asked, “Now, what’s wrong?”
 
“So, we were asleep. What’s so wrong with that?’ Toby challenged.
 
“Look at where your hand was, Toby.” Jeff said.
 
The two boys looked again and said in unison. “Jeff, please don’t show anyone else these pictures. We’ll do anything.”
 
“Okay slaves, now do as you were told, and I’ll decide when your slave time is up. Now Move.” Jeff said.
 
Jeff came out of the study and said, “Beau, get these three sleeping beauties showered and dressed and then you do the same things. Make sure they look perfect.” Jeff said, as he pulled out a pair of briefs and handed them to Beau and said, “Take these to Sammy.”
 
Beau knocked on Sammy’s door.
 
“Come in.” yelled Sammy.
 
Beau went in and Sammy was naked. When Sammy saw who it was, he dropped a towel in front of his pelvic area and said, “I thought it was Jeff.”
 
Beau started to laugh. “It’s okay for Jeff to see your penis, but not me. I’ve probably seen more male organs than Jeff. I’ve seen bigger and smaller ones.” Beau turned around to leave and turned back and said, “Mickey said you were a slob. He’s right, this room looks like a pig pen. I don’t see how you can find anything. No wonder you don’t have any clean underwear.”
 
Beau got dressed since he had already showered. The four guys came down the stairs looking like a million bucks.
 
Jeff had sent Toby and Bobby home with Josh and Ben.
 
Drew looked at them and said, “My goodness, these men are so handsome. I’m glad I am not going to be here tonight. Everyone would think I was ugly.”
 
Jeff announced, “I’m going to shower and change. You young guys wash your hands and put the crackers on four plates.”
 
Jeff left and everyone kept working. Jeff returned shortly and said, “Dad, go get ready and do it quick.”
 
I did as I was told and when I came back, Chip looked at me and said, “You look so much like Jeff that I can’t tell the difference.”
 
Spencer said, “Feel their bellies and then you can tell.”
 
Chip felt both of our stomachs and said, “They feel the same to me.”
 
“Let me see.” He felt our stomachs and said, “You know Cub, I think you are right. I’m going to get the scales and check them out.”
 
Spencer went to my bathroom and came back with the scales. “Jeff, lose your shoes and get on.”
 
Jeff got on and Spencer read, “160+ a little for Jeff.
 
“Doctor Dad, your turn.” Spencer said.
 
I climbed on after I shed my shoes and Spencer read “162.”
 
Beau said, “You know, I bet the difference is because Doctor Dad has wider feet than Jeff.”
 
Everyone looked at our feet and agreed.
 
Kenny looked at the clock and said, “We have to go. He picked Chip up and said, “Mr. Stunning Dude, you make sure everyone behaves tonight.”
 
Drew picked Chip up and winked and said, “I’ll see you later, you handsome dude.”
 
Beau was watching and after they left, he came to me and asked, “Were those two guys genuine? They aren’t even going to be here for dinner and just came to help?”
 
“Yep, they are two special young men.” I answered.
 
Mickey and Chris announced that they had to get ready to leave also. Jeff hugged them both and thanked them for their help.
 
Jeff kept watching the time and things were going in and out of the ovens right and left. “Dad, get the punch bowls, would you?”
 
I brought them as I was told to do and Jeff quickly filled them and said, “Cub, come here.”
 
Chip came in and Jeff handed him a small glass of the punch. “How does it taste?”
 
“It’s good. Chip said, as Jeff handed a small glass to the other guys. They all gave it a thumbs up. He poured in some sliced strawberries and orange slices and ice. “Now Dad, carry these in and take these guys with you. I want you to pour a bottle of Southern Comfort in this one. Explain the difference to the guys, since they will be assisting you in serving the punch.”
 
Beau, Teddy, Spencer and Chip followed me and I did as I was told.
 
Mrs. Tillison, Aunt Cora, Josh and Ben came in. Jeff must have heard them because he brought a cup of tea for Aunt Cora and asked, “Grams, what would you like?”
 
Linda and Eric came in and freshened up. They came into the living room and Sammy came down and said, “Jeff, I’m taking the T-bird.”
 
Eric was standing there and said, “No you’re not. That’s Jeff’s car not yours. Besides you don’t tell people what you are going to do. You ask. If you want a car tonight, take your mother’s. Don’t argue, or you will go with us.”
 
“But Dad.” Sammy started to say.
 
“But nothing, Sammy. Those are your alternatives and that’s it.” Eric almost growled.
 
Mrs. Tillison looked up and said, “Hi, Eric and Linda. Sounds like you had a successful trip to Minneapolis.”
 
Yes.” said Linda. We’re running late. We’ll talk to you later and tell you what happened.”
 
Sammy left sulking and waved and went out.
 
“Grams, I’ll explain later.” Jeff said. “I need to get back to the kitchen.”
 
Jeff went to the kitchen and people started to arrive. Jeff would periodically pop in and check to see who was there. When Jill and Reg arrived Chip asked, “What happened? You look so different. You look so pretty.”
 
Jeff went in and stopped. “Good grief, what happened to you two? What movie are you starring in? I gotta’ go. Talk to you later.”
 
At 5 minutes to six, Jeff came and looked around and said, “Someone is missing.”
 
The doorbell rang and Paul and Lash came in. Jeff said, “No, don’t tell us you had to milk the animals again.”
 
“Jeff, actually we had a flat tire. Can we wash our hands?” Lash asked.
 
Spencer said, “This way, gentleman.”
 
Jeff said, “Everyone find your way to the dining room, and find your place.”
 
To be continued...

 

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Editor's Notes:

It seems that there is a lot to do to put a small gathering like this one together.  I would hate to see what it would take for a large party.  Jeff is certainly on the ball as usual. Jeff is a very good person, but sometimes he doesn't stop to think that other people need to be asked sometimes instead of always being ordered around. I hope someday he will realize that other people want to be treated nicely.  It is funny because, when I first started reading this story, I thought it was cute the way Jeff put everyone on notice as to how they would act and what they would do, He became the authority figure.  He seems to have taken on that role in spades.  Don't get me wrong, I do still love him, but I wish he would think of how other people think when he simply orders them to do something.  I noticed it in this chapter by contrast of how Sammy was treated when he tried to do the same thing that Jeff does.  I notice that no one ever calls Jeff to task for doing it, but if someone else does it they get yelled at or simply get told to stop doing it. Spencer fell victim to that when he tried it in school several chapters back. He was told that he shouldn't act like that, when in fact, he was emulating Jeff's way of doing stuff, not necessarily in exactly the same way, but trying to follow in Jeff's footsteps. The funny thing is that I didn't really notice it till the party preparations, and a few other things in this chapter.  Somehow, Jeff's winning and loving personality have out shown his minor flaws.

 Darryl

AKA The Radio Rancher

Posted: 06/08/07